Thursday, April 9, 2015

Grammar: Too Much Information in Small Space Bound To Cause Confusion

"Police Searching for Montgomery Man Charged With Attempted Murder" was a headline released by the Batavia Patch at the end of last month, and in the world of police officers shooting fleeing suspects, leaves concern and confusion in the minds of readers.

Who was charged with attempted murder? The police searching or the Montgomery man?

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